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im giving in

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Literature Text

Im giving in
to the struggle,
to the pain

Im giving in
every second
of every day

Im given in
and given up
on this dream
It shatters upon the street

Im giving into my vices
creating this pain once more

Im giving into
the darkness again
the light to dissapear once again

Im giving in
This newer piece illustrates my past problems and some parts of it what i still struggle with now
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imponderable's avatar
this makes me think of how someone gives up on their dreams because it seems they spend most of the time within the hardships of achieving the dream, but never living it.